It's good but I felt that the drums could be more pronounced, and were a little too fast for a chill song like this.
It also seemed like there was a little too much going on at once.
The piano was very good, you had good melodies, and this is quite relaxing.
The biggest problem that I had is that a lot of the synths sounded very video gamy to me. That doesn't really suit trance very well.
I, again, must comment on how good the piano was, you are quite good at that. Maybe try making some Ambient, you'd probably do very well.
Yeah, I admit I completely messed up the drums this time. And the samples are horrible :(.
As for the song having too much going on at once, I'll have to agree with you as well. This song was very cluttered, especially after the quiet part.
As for the melodies, I'm glad you liked them. I personally think they're some of my best melodies. The piano, well, I'm a piano player myself so I try my best :P. I have a few other piano songs, such as Cries of the Tormented, Night in the Forest, Not a Care in the World, Spacewalk and Power of the Piano, they're probably much better than the piano part in this.
The synths, yeah, it was my first trance, so I couldn't really get the synths right. Also I'm not a regular listener of professional trance, so I'm never too sure what synths to use.
Wow lol, you liked the piano more than I expected xP. It was a sort of addition that came to me naturally - I almost always try and incorporate piano in my trance songs, and I have to admit I didn't work too hard on the piano part, but I'm glad you liked it! Also, I tried making ambient, and although people did like my ambient intro in Cries of the Tormented, for example, I can't stand making a whole ambient song. Ridiculous amounts of harmonizing, beautiful synths, loads of effects and stretching notes to two bars each isn't my thing xP.
Thanks again for the review, and sorry for the long response =/.
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The melodies were okay, a little repetitive, and the synths used weren't of very high quality.
The drums need a lot of work. You can barely hear them, they need to be accentuated quite a bit more. Even if a song is supposed to be about the melodies, you need a good drum pattern or two to liven things up a bit, especially if the song is in the whole Techno genre.
All in all, not bad, but not good either. Once you improve those aspects, this could grow to be quite a good song. It has a HUGE amount of potential.
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